Write from you heart!

From being around new writers, they are so concerned with what others think that they really can't write.  A writer is somewhat like a ballerina.  All are beautiful, but have their own personality and extraordinary gifts to bring to the publishing world.  A critique, is only a critique by one person.  If they harshly "criticize" they may be "judging your style."  Jump off that train as quickly as possible.  A good critique comes from a person who supports.  Listen to that voice!